Looking for advice for next year's year in review

For 2023 I did a year in review post for all of the year. You probably already know this because the first part has been pinned. I’m planning on doing another one for 2024 which I’ll probably start writing in August. I want to hear your thoughts on issues with this year’s year in review and what I can improve for next year.

I know the obvious criticism will be length, but I’m looking for criticisms on the quality of the review itself and how I can make it better for next year.

For reference, here’s all 8 parts: