Hey All.
I have been doing content now for a some time and would love some feedback if possible.
I am trying to expand my content ideas and include some of the more standard content as well done by many i.e. reviews and takes.
Here is my latest vid - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IKay4P5yTZY
I would appreciate honest constructive feedback. (i.e. Skill issue is not much to go with ;))
Thanks
Honest first impression after having skipped through the video watching like 10-15 seconds here and there:
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Title screen/logo comes and goes way to fast, i had to go back to see it properly. I would fade it both in and out slower as well as keep it on screen in full a few seconds (like only 2 seconds?) longer. I would perhaps also try to integrate it more if that makes sense? it feels cut in just to be there and doesn’t flow with the video. (the music cutting in really fast made the effect seem worse than it probably is as well)
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Your voice is really nice and suites the content well! So the addition of the “radio” voice changer isn’t at all necessary. It could absolutely be used here and there for gags/jokes/etc but having it on all the time during gameplay makes it harder to hear what you are saying (and also makes your already good voice worse).
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The camera spinning while the tank is driving (during introductions of the vehicles) made me a bit nauseous. I would personally use the normal follow replay camera and then use the spinning/free camera for cinematic shots in slowmotion while firing (or something else?). The Jagdtiger intro seems to spin way less and was way less jarring compared to the others. But this one is highly personal and others might not have this issue at all so take it with a grain of salt.
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The text editing is nice and looks nice! Good job on that one!
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The music volume can at times be a little loud compared to your speaking voice and i had to lower the volume a few times during music to then increase it again during talking (this might be a side effect of the “radio voice” perhaps?).
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Over all a good structure, good information/tips and a nice video. biggest change i would make is the voice, otherwise only minor things here and there that you personally might not even want to change. :)
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Thank you very much for this. :)
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