So the Senrai Maidens is unpopular at the moment for multiple reasons, but I do like them as I am a simple man, and I wanted to make a re-write for the two trailers.
Notice to Gaijin Officials: This is not me trying to insult your work, I’m merely showing my own fan-work or possible suggestion for the Senrai Maidens.
In the dark of dusk, a lone LeClerc is roaming the streets of a ruined city, the aftermath of a bombing run, the crew inside are searching around for 3 tanks.
Camera cuts to the inside of the tank
Their pictures stuck to the walls in the commanders area of the tank, an M1A1 HC Abrams, a Leopard 2A4M, the commander drags his hand over the pictures with a frown, as he turns back to his sights, he searches around through the optics.
Camera cuts back to an overview shot of the LeClerc, the POV from above the corner of a building
The Le Cler continued rolling through the quiet streets by itself
Camera cuts back to the POV of the commander’s sights, the thermals turned on
The commander scans the area, before pausing as he sees the outline of a tank inside of one of the ruined buildings.
Camera cuts to the commander’s face from the side, taking in his shocked expression
The commander calls out to the gunner
Camera cuts to the outside of the LeClerc, from the ground
The LeClerc is hit and stops in it’s tracks, as sparks fly from the tank and it goes up in flames, the commander, climbs out the tank
the camera cuts to a zoom in of him
Badly injured he climbs out the tank and falls to the ground, he tries crawling, but the abrams rolls out of cover and stops near him, the commander of the Abrams, Kate, who we can only see the boots of, climbs out of her hatch and off the tank, walking over to him, the camera pans down to see her cock her pistol, she stops over him and fires a single round into him. (The Camera doesn’t show his death.)
*the camera pans up to see Kate’s full face, she’s in an american tank commander uniform.
She pulls out her radio and radio’s Elsa ‘’Elsa, I need back up on my position, what’s your ETA?’’, the radio produces static before Elsa responds. ‘’Ankunft in 30 Sekunden, wir sind um den Block. (ETA 40 seconds, we’re around the block.), Kate clicks the radio, before her Abrams is slammed from behind by a LeClerc.
the camera turns to the LeClerc
Kate looks over to the Abrams to see above it, now showed she was down to two crew members, and a substantial repair time, she turns back to the LeClerc
the camera turns to the LeClerc
The camera slowly zooms in on the LeClercs barrel (for dramatic flare), when fire suddenly shoots out from the barrel.
camera turns back to Kate
Kate winces, bracing herself with her arms, before looking up.
The camera turns to the LeClerc
The LeClerc is engulfed in flames, driving around the LeClerc and appearing through the smoke is Elsa’s Leopard.
The Leopard stops next to the Abrams, and Elsa pops out her hatch, looking down at Kate, who looks unhappy, ‘’I lost 2 crew and my engine ya know.’’, clearly upset Elsa didn’t arrive faster.
Elsa hops off the tank,her german tank commander uniform now in view, walking around the Leopard, while looking at Kate
‘’Dann lass uns dich wieder in Aktion bringen. (Then let’s get you back in action.).
The camera switches to a LeClerc popping out from behind a corner, aiming it’s gun at the two tanks, before turning back to Elsa and Kate
Elsa and Kate pause the repairs, looking up with horrified faces.
*The camera switched back to the LeClerc, which is hit, and it’s turn popped off in a ball of fire, before the camera turns to a red T-80 screeching to a halt next to the burning LeClerc.
The camera switches to a pov on top the turret as Maria pops out the hatch, she’s chugging down a bottle of vodka (or cola for youtube regulations or something like that), the camera turns to the woman’s face, before she tosses the bottle with a burp, dirt and sooth covering her face.
‘’Я всё объясню, только поторопитесь. (I’ll cover, just hurry up.)’’, Maria says wiping her mouth, before disappearing back into the hatch, as the T-80 takes up a defensive position.
The camera turns back to Kate and Elsa, POV from the ground looking up as they finish repairs and quickly jump back in
The three tanks rolls down the street as they halt at the outskirts of town, watching as a wall of Le Clercs charge at them.
The camera switches to a three way view of Kate, Elsa and Maria’s stunned expressions, before Elsa forces herself into a calm expression.
‘’Kate, Deckungsfeuer! Elsa, ESS aktivieren, zurückziehen und Verteidigungsstellungen einnehmen! (Kate, cover fire, Elsa, deploy ESS, fall back and take up defenses.)’’
Kate gives off a confused, almost offended look as she looks over to Elsa, ‘’Hang on, who made you squad leader!?”
Maria looks down at Kate, frowning, ‘’Не время, Кейт. (Not the time Kate.)’’
Kate groans and rolls her eyes.
*the camera zooms out from Kate’s barrel, to show all three tanks side by side, in slow mo, as they start reversing, then the Abrams fires, covering the camera in a wall of fire and smoke.
Transition to the WAR Thunder logo.